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1. I skiped my english class in the academy yesterday. Because one of my friend asked me to skip the class and to hang out with her. It was her bad day. So i did.
We ate some food in the rasturance and played bowling and drank beer.
I was fun too.
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1. I skiped my english class in the academy yesterday.
>> I skipped my english class in the academy yesterday.
Because one of my friend asked me to skip the class and to hang out with her.
>> Because one of my friends asked me to skip the class and to hang out with her.
It was her bad day.
>> Correct
So i did.
>> Correct
We ate some food in the rasturance and played bowling and drank beer.
>> We ate some food in a restaurant, played bowling and drank beer.
I was fun too.
>> It was fun.
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