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2017-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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NK post photos and vedeos on the website by themselves to prove their success about ICBM, SLBM, and other nuclear tests. Are you telling that all those pictures and vedieos could be manipulated? If it is a big con by Nk, why EN strenthen a saction and our president asks international cooperation blockading NK in the summit? and other contries such as Russia, US, Japan even China express their concerns about north' provocation?

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Hello [이름]!

I revised some of you sentences and I hope I helped you. I also underlined all the misspelled words.

~T. Eunice

NK post photos and vedeos on the website by themselves to prove their success about ICBM, SLBM, and other nuclear tests.
>> North Korea posts photos and videos on the website to prove their success about ICBM, SLBM, and other nuclear tests.
Are you telling that all those pictures and vedieos could be manipulated?
>> Are you telling that all those pictures and videos could be manipulated?
If it is a big con by Nk, why EN strenthen a saction and our president asks international cooperation blockading NK in the summit?
>> If it is a big con by North Korea, why EN strengthen a saction and our president asks an international cooperation blocking North Korea in the summit?
and other contries such as Russia, US, Japan even China express their concerns about north\' provocation?

>> And other contries such as Russia, US, Japan even China express their concerns about North Korea provocation?

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