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Dear [Name]. [Name],
Finally, we issued the debit note about QM no. 200618294 and 200618293.
Can you talk to me who is responsble in Woochang about this case?
I will sent e-mail debit note to Woochang responsble.
Thank you for your help.
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Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> Correct.
Finally, we issued the debit note about QM no. 200618294 and 200618293.
>> Correct.
Can you talk to me who is responsble in Woochang about this case?
>> Can you tell me who is responsible about this case in Woochang?
I will sent e-mail debit note to Woochang responsble.
>> I will send an e-mail about the debit note to Woochang.
Thank you for your help.
>> Correct.
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