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Dear all,
I will ask payment plan to purchasing department.
But we didn't received material yet as seen 4 invoices.
So we will pay after receive material.
Thank you.
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Job well done my dear Bella..:)
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Teacher Cam^^
Dear all,
I will ask payment plan to purchasing department.
>>I will ask the plan of payment to purchasing department.
But we didn't received material yet as seen 4 invoices.
>>But we havent received the materials yet as seen in the invoices.
So we will pay after receive material.
>>So we will pay after we receive the material.
Thank you.
>>Correct!!
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