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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear all,
Would you please give me a some detail about development cost?
And I think that you are wrong send to BKO original invoice of development cost as seen below.
It seems that customer is Behr INDIA not Bher Korea.
Please see the attached file and please check again.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for dropping in your composition..
Job well done my dear..
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Teacher Cam
Dear all,
Would you please give me a some detail about development cost?
>>Would you please give me the details about the development cost?
And I think that you are wrong send to BKO original invoice of development cost as seen below.
>>And I think you sent the wrong detail to the BKO original invoice of development cost as seen below.
It seems that customer is Behr INDIA not Bher Korea.
>>It seems that the customer is Behr India and not Bher Korea.
Please see the attached file and please check again.
>>correct!
Thank you.
>>correct!
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