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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! Hambach suggested cancel the debits for 85300050 about 32,49 Eur and 85300052 about 33,60 Eur as below reason. But thoes debit notes are contain return material amount and admin cost about inferior goods. Even we couln't send material about 85300052 to Hambach and holding now. Because TNT requried invoice not debit note. So would you please give me a solution that cancel the debits or not. Dear [Name], Good morning! I will give to you answer as soon as posible after discuss with my boss. Thank you.

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Dear [Name]. [Name],

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Good morning!

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Hambach suggested cancel the debits for 85300050 about 32,49 Eur and 85300052 about 33,60 Eur as below reason.

>> Hambach suggested that we cancel the debits for 85300050 about 32,49 Eur and 85300052 about 33,60 Eur and the reasons are the following:
But thoes debit notes are contain return material amount and admin cost about inferior goods.

>> But those debit notes contain the returned material's amount and the admin cost of the inferior goods.
Even we couln't send material about 85300052 to Hambach and holding now.

>> We couldn't even send the material 85300052 to Hambach.
Because TNT requried invoice not debit note.

>> Because the TNT requires the invoice debit note.
So would you please give me a solution that cancel the debits or not.
>> So could you please give me an advice-- whether to cancel the debit or not.
Dear [Name],

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Good morning!

>> correct
I will give to you answer as soon as posible after discuss with my boss.

>> I will give you an answer as soon as I discuss it with my boss.
Thank you.

>> correct