composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
I've issued the debit note about the defect parts.
Please see the attached file.
If you have any question, please let me or know Mr. [Name].
Thank you.
Dear [Name]. [Name],
I expect that you upload those datas in Bellin.
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Bella!! Just keep on sending your compositions so that in this way you would eventually know the development of your writing skill. ^^ take care and talk to you soon then.
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> Correct
I've issued the debit note about the defect parts.
>> Correct
Please see the attached file.
>> Correct
If you have any question, please let me or know Mr. [Name].
>> If you have any questions, please let me or Mr.Choi know.
Thank you.
>> Correct
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>Correct
I expect that you upload those datas in Bellin.
>> I expect that you uploaded those data in Bellin.
Thank you for your help.
>> Correct
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