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Dear [Name],
We need the details for booking in SAP.
Now, we don't know for what about development and when those are restored.
If we havn't details, we cannot book in SAP and we cannot pay.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thak you.
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My dear Bella,
Thank you so much for dropping in your composition. Great composition you made my dear!
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Teacher Cam
Dear [Name],
We need the details for booking in SAP.
>>We need the detail for booking in SAP.
Now, we don't know for what about development and when those are restored.
>>We dont know about the progress and when those will be restored.
If we havn't details, we cannot book in SAP and we cannot
>>If we dont have the detail, we may not be able to book in SAP.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
>>correct!
Thak you.
>>Thank you!
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