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2011-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], I have some questions about 85300052 of debit note. I already canceled the 85300052. But we couldn't send the material of 85300052 to Hambach. Because the TNT requries the invoice not debit note. I requested throw away the material to Mr. [Name] because we do not received the matreial's cost. Mr. [Name] of Quality team said that they want documentation for cancel the this case . And also said that Hambach requested return delivery the metarial to Hambach. And they want analyze their metarial because they can't accept about rising quality index.

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Hello there my dear,

      Thank you for sending these compositions. I have  made the mecessary corrections. Pleasae be guided. I hope it would help.

 

Dear [Name]. [Name]:

>>Correct
I have some questions about 85300052 of debit note.

>> I have some questions about 85300052 debit note.
I already canceled the 85300052.

>>Correct
But we couldn't send the material of 85300052 to Hambach.

>> But we couldn't send the material 85300052 to Hambach.
Because the TNT requries the invoice not debit note.

>> Because the TNT requires the invoice not debit note.
I requested throw away the material to Mr. [Name] because we do not received the matreial's cost.

>> I requested to throw away the material to Mr. [Name] because we didn't receive the matreial's cost.
Mr. [Name] of Quality team said that they want documentation for cancel the this case.

>> Mr. [Name] of quality team said that they want documentation for cancelation of this case.
And also said that Hambach requested return delivery the metarial to Hambach.

>> And he also said that Hambach requested a return delivery of the metarial.

And they want analyze their metarial because they can't accept about rising quality index.

>> And they want to check their meterial because they can't accept the rising quality index.

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