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Dear [Name]. [Name]:
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I have some questions about 85300052 of debit note.
>> I have some questions about 85300052 debit note.
I already canceled the 85300052.
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But we couldn't send the material of 85300052 to Hambach.
>> But we couldn't send the material 85300052 to Hambach.
Because the TNT requries the invoice not debit note.
>> Because the TNT requires the invoice not debit note.
I requested throw away the material to Mr. [Name] because we do not received the matreial's cost.
>> I requested to throw away the material to Mr. [Name] because we didn't receive the matreial's cost.
Mr. [Name] of Quality team said that they want documentation for cancel the this case.
>> Mr. [Name] of quality team said that they want documentation for cancelation of this case.
And also said that Hambach requested return delivery the metarial to Hambach.
>> And he also said that Hambach requested a return delivery of the metarial.
And they want analyze their metarial because they can't accept about rising quality index.
>> And they want to check their meterial because they can't accept the rising quality index.
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