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But I already cancelde the debit note.
>> But I already canceled the debit note.
I don't know how to return the material to Hambach.
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If we don't need to return the material to Hambach, Mr. [Name] of Quality team reqeusted the documentation which Hambach's Quality team agree that they not receive the material.
>> If we don't need to return the material to Hambach, Mr. [Name] of Quality team reqeusted the documentation which Hambach's Quality team agreed that they won뭪 receive the material.
But if as Mr. [Name] of Quality team's insistence, we have to return the material to Hambach, please give me a next process to return the material to Hambach.
>> But if as Mr. [Name] of Quality team insisted, we have to return the material to Hambach, please give methe next process to return the material to Hambach.
Thank you for your help.
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