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2011-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], I have question about invoice Number. Last month, your uploaded Bellin data's invoice number and PDF file's name is 93124935. But when I open the PDF file, the invoice number is 92297008 and you upoload the invoice 92297008 in Bellin for August . is this duplicate? or can I delete the 93124935 invoice and only keep the 92297008 invoice?? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Bella!

Thank you very much for trusting me in editing this letter you prepared. I hope I was able to help you.

See you in class!

T. Camille

 

Dear [Name],

>>correct
I have question about invoice Number.

>>I have a question about the invoice Number.
Last month, your uploaded Bellin data's invoice number and PDF file's name is 93124935.

>> Last month, you uploaded Bellin data's invoice number and the PDF file's name was 93124935.
But when I open the PDF file, the invoice number is 92297008 and you upoload the invoice 92297008 in Bellin for August .

>>But when I opened the PDF file, the invoice number was 92297008 and you upoloaded the invoice 92297008 in Bellin for the month of August .
is this duplicate?

>>Is this a duplicate?

 or can I delete the 93124935 invoice and only keep the 92297008 invoice??

>> Or, can I delete the 93124935 invoice and only keep the 92297008 invoice??
I'm looking forward for your reply.

>>correct
Thank you.

>>correct

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