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2011-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], When we cancel the debit note, we haven't issue the credit note. I will ask new process my boss about cancel the debit note after come back his business trip. Now, we already cancelled as seen below. Thank you.

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Hello there my dear, Thank you so much for dropping in your composition. Here are the corrections, I hope they could help you my dear.. Talk to you again later.. Teacher Cam   Dear [Name],When we cancel the debit note, we haven't issue the credit note.>>When we cancel the debit note, we haven't issued the credit note yet.I will ask new process my boss about cancel the debit note after come back his business trip.>>I will ask the new process to my boss about how to cancel the debit note after his business trip.Now, we already cancelled as seen below.>>correct!Thank you. >>correct!

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