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Hi there my dear,
Here are some corrections.
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Teacher Camille
Dear [Name],
Good morning!
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I have some questions about Notification 200636328.
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This case's contack person is Woochang that our supplier.
>>This case's contact person is Woochang who is our supplier.
But quality guys said that they found defect part after making HVAC that finished product.
>>But quality control personnel said that they found defective parts after making HVAC as a finished product.
So they upload the notification using U2163001
>>So they uploaded the notification using U2163001
U2163001 part number is Behr korea's HVAC part number not Woochang.
>>U2163001 part number is Behr korea's HVAC part number is not Woochang.
And I couldn't post the debit note. Because there are no PO number.
>> And I couldn't post the debit note because there are no PO numbers.
Would you please give an answer how to post it in this case?
>>Would you please tell me how to post it in this case?
I'm looking forward for your reply.
>>I'm looking forward to your answer.
Thank you.
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