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2011-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good morning! I have some questions about Notification 200636328. This case's contack person is Woochang that our supplier. But quality guys said that they found defect part after making HVAC that finished product. So they upload the notification using U2163001 U2163001 part number is Behr korea's HVAC part number not Woochang. And I couldn't post the debit note. Because there are no PO number. Would you please give an answer how to post it in this case? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear,

Here are some corrections.

Have great day!

Teacher Camille

 

Dear [Name],
Good morning!

>>CORRECT
I have some questions about Notification 200636328.

>>CORRECT
This case's contack person is Woochang that our supplier.
>>This case's contact person is Woochang who is our supplier.
But quality guys said that they found defect part after making HVAC that finished product.
>>But quality control personnel said that they found defective parts after making HVAC as a finished product.
So they upload the notification using U2163001
>>So they uploaded the notification using U2163001
U2163001 part number is Behr korea's HVAC part number not Woochang.
>>U2163001 part number is Behr korea's HVAC part number is not Woochang.
And I couldn't post the debit note. Because there are no PO number.
>> And I couldn't post the debit note because there are no PO numbers.
Would you please give an answer how to post it in this case?
>>Would you please tell me how to post it in this case?
I'm looking forward for your reply.
>>I'm looking forward to your answer.
Thank you.

>>correct

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