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Hi there my dear,
Here are the corrections of your business correspondence.
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Teacher Camille
Dear [Name]. [Name],
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Good morning!>>CORRECT
I have some questions about QM notification.>>CORRECT
This case is charge back to Alianz Insurance Corporation that material missing during transportation.
>>This case is charged back to Alianz Insurance Corporation that some material were missing during transportation.
We have to request all of material amount and we have to charge back in Euro.
>>We have to request the liquidation of all materials and a charge back in Euro.
But system is autocally setting in KRW ,we try to change the Currency but couln't changed it.
>>But the system automatically converts to KRW ,we tried to change the Currency but couln't changed it
Alianz Global Corporate a Specialty is nomally transact business with BKO in Euro.
>>Alianz Global Corporate nomally transact business with BKO in Euro.
Would you please give me a solution how to change the Currency??
>>Would you please give me us some recommendation on how to change Currency.
Thank you for your help.
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