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Dear all,
Good afternoon!
How about the " Samihun" Korean restaurant for tomorrow dinner as seen below?
Location: Seomyeon 9 gate in subway
The opposite Youngkwang books store party.
Tel: [전화번호]
Sebsite:www. samihun.com
If everybody accepted I will reserve tomorrow 07:00 PM 7~8 person.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
It was a pleasure meeting you my dear!
Thank you so much for sending your composition.
I'll talk to you again tomorrow! :)
Take care and be happy!
~T.Ritch~
Dear all,>>CORRECT
>>To whom it may concern,Good afternoon!>>CORRECTHow about the " Samihun" Korean restaurant for tomorrow dinner as seen below?>>How about we have dinner at "Samihun" Korean restaurant tomorrow? Details are seen below.Location: Seomyeon 9 gate in subway The opposite Youngkwang books store party.>>Location: Seomyeon gate 9 in the subway, opposite of Youngkwang bookstore.Tel: [전화번호]>>CORRECTSebsite:www. samihun.com>>Website:www.samihun.comIf everybody accepted I will reserve tomorrow 07:00 PM 7~8 person.>>If everybody agrees, I will have the reservation tomorrow at 7:00PM for 8 people.Thank you
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