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Dear [Name]. [Name],
As you know, YDK said that they cannot accept about additional expense.
Would you please discuss with YDK's responsible??
And please give me some documentation.
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella! ^^
Thank you for your composition.
I'll talk to you again tomorrow!
Take care! :)
Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CORRECT!As you know, YDK said that they cannot accept about additional expense.>>As you know, YDK said that they cannot accept the additional expense.Would you please discuss with YDK's responsible??>>Would you please discuss this with YDK's representative?And please give me some documentation.>>CORRECT!Thank you for your help.
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