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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name] - san,
Please refer to the below debit note that changed amount.
And please delete the debit note that I gave you debit note of 45.00 Euro.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hey there! ^^ I hope you're having a great time right now. So anyway, here's the corrections I've made. Talk to you later. ^^
Dear [Name] - san,>>Correct!Please refer to the below debit note that changed amount.>>Please refer to the changed amount at the debit note below.And please delete the debit note that I gave you debit note of 45.00 Euro.>>And please delete the previous debit note that I sent you - "debit note: 45.00 Euro".Thank you.
>>Correct!
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