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Dear [Name]. [Name],
We have some questions about english version of debit note.
TNT wants English version invoice because TNT said that when they progress clearance, they must put in data in English not accept other language in system.
So they said that if we can't change other language to English they wants English version invoice with other language version invoice.
So TNT other language version invoice use with material and send the vendor, English version invoice will use only progress clearance.
So can I make english version invoice by excell?
I will use other language version invoice with vendor and I will store other language version invoice.
I will not store English version invoice in our system.
Can I do that??
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Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CorrectWe have some questions about english version of debit note.>>CorrectTNT wants English version invoice because TNT said that when they progress clearance, they must put in data in English not accept other language in system.>> TNT wants English version of the invoice because TNT said that when they progress clearance, they must put the data in English and the system won't accept other language.So they said that if we can't change other language to English they wants English version invoice with other language version invoice.>> So they said that if we can't change the other language to English they want English version invoice with other language.So TNT other language version invoice use with material and send the vendor, English version invoice will use only progress clearance.>> So TNT used other language version invoice with material and sent it to the vendor, English version invoice will only be used in progress clearance.So can I make english version invoice by excell?>> So can I make english version invoice using excell?I will use other language version invoice with vendor and I will store other language version invoice.>> I will use other language version invoice with the vendor and I will store other language version in the invoice.I will not store English version invoice in our system.>>CorrectCan I do that?>>Correct
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