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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
Behr Brazil sent e-mail about invoice of October 03.2011 as seen below.
But we still not contain this invoice in Sep.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]! Thank you for your composition. Kindly check some of the corrections that I made. Have a good day!
Dear [Name]. [Name],
>> Correct.
Good morning!
>> Correct.
Behr Brazil sent e-mail about invoice of October 03.2011 as seen below.
>> Behr Brazil sent an e-mail about the invoice of October 03, 2011 as seen below.
But we still not contain this invoice in Sep.
>> But we don't have a copy of the invoice last September.
Thank you.
>> Correct.
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