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2011-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Dear fangrong li, How was your holiday? I have some question about invoice of 11BKTUBE0801 . I received the invoice of 11BKTUBE0801 in Aug. The total amount is 30,248.06Euro. The invoice of 30,248.06Euro already posted it last month. But I received the invoice of 11BKTUBE0801 from our Logistic guy . The total amount is 10,576.37Euro and GR is done. Is invoice of 11BKTUBE0801 duplicate?? Please see the attached file . I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

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Hi there,       Good afternoon! Thank you for this composition.  Please be guided by the correctrions below: Dear [Name],>>CorrectHow was your holiday?>>CorrectI have some question about invoice of 11BKTUBE0801 .>>CorrectI received the invoice 11BKTUBE0801 in Aug.>>CorrectThe total amount is 30,248.06 Euro. >>Correct The invoice of 30,248.06Euro already posted it last month.>>The invoice  30,248.06 Euro  wasalready posted last month.But I received the invoice 11BKTUBE0801 from our Logistic guy .>>CorrectThe total amount is 10,576.37Euro and GR is done.>>CorrectIs the invoice 11BKTUBE0801 duplicate??>>CorrectPlease see the attached file .>>CorrectI'm looking forward for your reply.>>CorrectThank you. >>Correct  

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