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Dear [Name], Good morning! Here's it's a little hot , we still turn on the airconditioner. We should take off the jarket when we walk BKO around place after lunch. I also wish go to Stuttgart. SK( Seon geun Lee) will go to Stittgart for training in coming December. I want to go to Stittgart with SK even if I hide in SK's baggage. :)

Hello Ms. [Name]! :) Thank you so much for sending your composition. Here are the corrections. Have a wonderful day and take care! I'll talk to you later! :)   Dear [Name],>>CORRECT!Good morning!>>CORRECT!Here's it's a little hot , we still turn on the airconditioner.>>Here it's a little hot, so we still turn on the airconditioner.We should take off the jarket when we walk BKO around place after lunch.>>We should take off our jackets when we walk BKO around the place after lunch.I also wish go to Stuttgart.>>I also wish to go to Stuttgart.SK( Seon geun Lee) will go to Stittgart for training in coming December.>>SK (Seon geun Lee will go to Stuttgart for training this coming December.I want to go to Stittgart with SK even if I hide in SK's baggage. :) >>I want to go to Stuttgart with SK even if I hide in SK's baggage. :)