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Dear [Name]. [Name]
I'd like to imform you about your foreign travel allowance.
I think that you can remember your travel expense voucher.
Ms. [Name] from HR asked me about your voucher .
She asked that why didn't requested foreign travel allowance of 600,000KRW in expense voucher.
New regulation says Meal charge can be reimversed with actual receipt within daily limit and the daily allowance shall be paid according to the number of travel days.
Ms. [Name] said that daily limit is 40.00Euro.
Your meal charge within daily limit and you can request foreign travel allowance of 600,000KRW.
Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name] ho also received the meal charge and daily allowance after when they come back.
So, if you want receive both, I will make receip form.
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Dear [Name]. [Name]>>Dear [Name]. [Name],I'd like to imform you about your foreign travel allowance.
>>I'd like to inform you about your foreign travel allowance.I think that you can remember your travel expense voucher.
>>CORRECT!Ms. [Name] from HR asked me about your voucher .
>>Ms. [Name] from the HR asked me about your voucher.She asked that why didn't requested foreign travel allowance of 600,000KRW in expense voucher.>>She asked me why didn't the requested foreign travel allowance of 600,000KRW in the expense voucher.
New regulation says Meal charge can be reimversed with actual receipt within daily limit and the daily allowance shall be paid according to the number of travel days.
>>The new regulation says the meal charge can be reimbursed with the actual receipt within the daily limit and the daily allowance shall be paid according to the number of travel days.Ms. [Name] said that daily limit is 40.00Euro.
>>Ms. [Name] said that the daily limit is 40.00Euro. Your meal charge within daily limit and you can request foreign travel allowance of 600,000KRW.
>>Your meal will be charged within the daily limit and you can request for the foreign travel allowance of 600,000KRW.Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name] ho also received the meal charge and daily allowance after when they come back.
>>Mr. [Name] and Mr. [Name] ho also received the meal charge and the daily allowance after they came back.So, if you want receive both, I will make receip form.
>>So, if you want to receive both, I will make the receipt form.
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