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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good morning!
I'm [이름][이름] you from Behr Korea and I will become ELO Scanstation user.
I'd like to receive the training of ELO in CW 42 for my job.
Would you please tell me when you available?
If you inform me when you avilable and how long take it, I will send invitation letter using by calendar.
I'm looking forward for your reply.
Thank you for your help.
강사 첨삭
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Dear [Name]. [Name],>>Correct!Good morning!>>Correct!I'm [이름][이름] you from Behr Korea and I will become ELO Scanstation user.>>I'm [이름][이름] You from Behr, Korea and I will be the ELO Scan station user.I'd like to receive the training of ELO in CW 42 for my job.>>Correct!Would you please tell me when you available? If you inform me when you avilable and how long take it, I will send invitation letter using by calendar.>>Please inform me of your most available time and how long can we have the training. I will be sending an invitation letter using a calendar.I'm looking forward for your reply.>>Correct!Thank you for your help.
>>Correct!
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