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Dear [Name]. [Name], I have some questions about Mr. [Name]'s expense. We paid expense of Mr.Min's cellphone and office rental once a month. Cellphone 's amount is approximately 43,220KRW in month. Office rental fee is 660,000KRW (include the VAT) in month. If he belong to Mahle Industrial Filtration Korea . Should we terminated all of Mr. [Name]'s expense and should we changed expense to Mahle Industrial Filtration Korea ?? I'm looking forward for your reply. Thank you.

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