Composition

2018-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Composition: Answer the following question briefly: As they say, "Time is Gold". Under what circumstances does time pass slowly and under what circumstances does it pass quickly? I feel time pass slowly when I is in trouble or in pain. In the past, I was sick due to a back pain. Ten minutes to the hospital felt so long. and when I was a student, when I was punished by the teacher, 30minutes felt like 2 or 3 hours. I feel time pass quickly when I enjoy something, game, date, travel, playing golf and eating delicious dish. Looking back on the past, I think time has passed quickly.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]!(\",)

Thank you so much for finding time on your busy day to make your homework. You did great! Keep it up. I agree to everything you said. Talk to you later!(\",)

~T. Lynn

I feel time pass slowly when I is in trouble or in pain.

>> I feel that time passes slowly whenever I\'m in trouble or in pain.
 In the past, I was sick due to a back pain.

>> correct!
 Ten minutes to the hospital felt so long.
>> correct!
and when I was a student, when I was punished by the teacher, 30minutes felt like 2 or 3 hours.
>> When I was a student and I was punished by my teacher, 30 minutes felt like 2 or 3 hours.
I feel time pass quickly when I enjoy something, game, date, travel, playing golf and eating delicious dish.
>> I feel time passes quickly when I enjoy doing something, like playing a game, going on a date, traveling, playing golf and eating a delicious dish.
Looking back on the past, I think time has passed quickly.

>> correct!

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