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2011-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Karen

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Dear [Name]. [Name], How was your business trip? I'd like to inform you though you came back to the Korea today. Company card already paid while you business trip. So we absolutely need your voucher of company card. I kindly expect that you give me a voucher of company card as soon as possible. Thank you for your cooporation.

강사 첨삭

Hello!  Good work on your composition, I think you delivered your thoughts really well. I really appreciate it when you make your compositions. I always have fun reading them. Please keep doing a good job! Aja! (~__~)   Dear [Name]. [Name],>>Correct!How was your business trip?>>Correct!Id like to inform you though you came back to the Korea today.Company card already paid while you business trip.>>Id like to inform you that although you came back to Korea today, our company has already paid for your business trip. So we absolutely need your voucher of company card.>>So we absolutely need the voucher of your company card. I kindly expect that you give me a voucher of company card as soon as possible.>>I am expecting that you will give me the voucher of your company card as soon as possible.Thank you for your cooporation. >> Correct grammar but wrong spelling. >>Thank you for your cooperation.

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