Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I believe in faith healing to some extent because I have seen proof of this but still it cannot heal every sickness in the world.
~Lynn
I guess they are not capable of medical attention.
>> I guess they are not capable of medical care.
However, I believe every living thing has its own energy, regardless of a specific religion.
>> However, I believe every living thing has its own energy, regardless of religion.
If a person has a strong wish for something, such as cursing the other somebody, they can affect him somewhat badly, and vice versa.
>> If a person has a strong wish for something, such as cursing someone, they can affect him somewhat badly and vice versa.
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