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2018-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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What is your opinion on faith healers and witch doctors? Are they both able to heal people and also curse them? In other words, can they have both a positive and a negative influence over a person? I guess they are not capable of medical attention. However, I believe every living thing has its own energy, regardless of a specific rerligion. If a person has a strong wish for something, such as cursing the other somebody, they can affect him somewhat badly,and vice versa.

강사 첨삭

[이름],

I believe in faith healing to some extent because I have seen proof of this but still it cannot heal every sickness in the world.

~Lynn

I guess they are not capable of medical attention.

>> I guess they are not capable of medical care.
 However, I believe every living thing has its own energy, regardless of a specific religion.

>> However, I believe every living thing has its own energy, regardless of religion.  

If a person has a strong wish for something, such as cursing the other somebody, they can affect him somewhat badly, and vice versa.

>> If a person has a strong wish for something, such as cursing someone, they can affect him somewhat badly and vice versa.

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