Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
1. loner
2. introvert
3. not to that extent
4. solitude
5. empathy
I might be an extreme loner, but I am not an introvert.
There are some people who doesn't get out of their home. however, I don't play alone to that extent. I just prefer silent solitude to distracting noise. I guess there are quite many people who can have empathy with me.
강사 첨삭
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I might be an extreme loner, but I am not an introvert.
>> correct
There are some people who doesn\'t get out of their home. however, I don\'t play alone to that extent. I just prefer silent solitude to distracting noise. I guess there are quite many people who can have empathy with me.
>> There are some people who don\'t go out of their homes. However, I don\'t spend my time alone to that extent. I just prefer the silence and solitude to the distracting noise. I guess there are quite a number of people who can empathize with me.
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