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2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Do you believe that everything can be explained rationally or do some phenomena defy scientific explanation? Because the human's science cannot be perfect and completely conquer the principle of space, like God, there are so many things that cannot be explained on our own judgement. Maybe, the other inving things from the space can let us know the paranormal activity unless they try to kill us.

강사 첨삭

[이름],

There are still many things that defy scientific explanation today but I think people might be able to explain them in the future.

~Lynn

Because the human\'s science cannot be perfect and completely conquer the principle of space, like God, there are so many things that cannot be explained on our own judgment.

>> Science cannot be perfect and it cannot completely conquer the principle of space, like God, there are so many things that cannot be explained by our own judgment.

Maybe, the other inving things from the space can let us know the paranormal activity unless they try to kill us.

>> Maybe, the other living things from the outer space can let us know the truth about paranormal activities unless they would like to kill us.

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