Composition
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If a book has been made into a movie, which do you prefer to do first, see the movie or read the book? Why?
I prefer to watch a movie rather than to read.
It's mainly because I do not like reading.
Reading makes me tired and it requriers quite much time.
Thus, I more enjoy watching movies than reading books.
강사 첨삭
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If a book has been made into a movie, which do you prefer to do first, see the movie or read the book? Why?
I prefer to watch a movie rather than to read.
>> I would rather watch a movie than read a book.
It\'s mainly because I do not like reading.
>> correct
Reading makes me tired and it requriers quite much time.
>> Reading makes me physically and mentally tired, and it requires much time.
Thus, I more enjoy watching movies than reading books.
>> Thus, I enjoy watching movies more than reading books.
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