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2018-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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When the first rockets were sent up into space, or the first manned flights started, it was big news. Nowadays, unless associated with a tragedy, space-related news seems to be old hat. Why do you think that is? Yes, I think it can be said that it's old hat. However, it is not available to most of the people. I guess space tour will be an extremely luxurious product which can be bought by only billionaires. I mean it is technically possible and human can do it, but it costs terribly. Nobody will afford it unless he or she can feel some satisfaction or profits with space travels.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

You are right! If I\'m a billionaire, I\'ll try it just for kicks.(\",)

~Lynn

Yes, I think it can be said that it\'s old hat.

>> correct!
However, it is not available to most of the people.

>> correct!
I guess space tour will be an extremely luxurious product which can be bought by only billionaires.

>> I guess space tour will be an extremely luxurious product which can be bought by billionaires only .
I mean it is technically possible and human can do it, but it costs terribly.

>> I mean it is technically possible and human can do it, but it costs terribly high.
Nobody will afford it unless he or she can feel some satisfaction or profits with space travels.

>> Nobody will afford it unless he or she can feel some satisfaction or gain profits with space travels.

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