Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Is capital punishment an acceptable punishment for particularly horrible crimes? Why/why not?
I think it is acceptable. Becuase it cannot be avoided for our society's interests. If they live with us, we might keep having crimes continuously. Anyway, it is quite sad a job to get rid of human lives on our human's own.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you for giving me your insight regarding the topic as always. Good luck on your first day of work!(\",)
~Lynn
I think it is acceptable. Becuase it cannot be avoided for our society\'s interests.
>> I think it is acceptable because it cannot be avoided for our society\'s interest.
If they live with us, we might keep having crimes continuously.
>> correct!
Anyway, it is quite sad a job to get rid of human lives on our human\'s own.
>> Anyway, it is quite a sad job to get rid of human lives by our own hands.
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