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2011-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good morning! How are you? Here it's a little cold , Whether is typical autumn. I have some questions about IC Netting in Bellin. Would you please give me an information about T-code in SAP as seen below? And can I upload the Netting data in test module like an IC balance? I'm looking forward for your reply. May be I will send e-mail everyday for the questions about IC Netting. Thank you for everthing.

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Hi there,      Good afternoon! thank you for this composition. I made few corrections for you. I hope it will help.   Dear [Name],>>CorrectGood morning! >>CorrectHow are you? >>CorrectHere it\'s a little cold , Whether is typical autumn. >>It is cold here, the weather is the typical Autumn that we have.I have some questions about IC Netting in Bellin. >>CorrectWould you please give me an information about T-code in SAP as seen below? >>Correct >>Would you please give me some information about T-code in SAP as seen below?And can I upload the netting data in test module like an IC balance? >>CorrectI\'m looking forward for your reply. >>CorrectMay be I will send e-mail everyday for the questions about IC Netting.>>Correct Thank you for everthing. >>Correct (observe the proper spelling of the word everything)

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