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Dear [Name],
Good morning!
How are you?
Here it's a little cold , Whether is typical autumn.
I have some questions about IC Netting in Bellin.
Would you please give me an information about T-code in SAP as seen below?
And can I upload the Netting data in test module like an IC balance?
I'm looking forward for your reply.
May be I will send e-mail everyday for the questions about IC Netting.
Thank you for everthing.
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
Good afternoon! thank you for this composition. I made few corrections for you. I hope it will help.
Dear [Name],>>CorrectGood morning!
>>CorrectHow are you?
>>CorrectHere it\'s a little cold , Whether is typical autumn.
>>It is cold here, the weather is the typical Autumn that we have.I have some questions about IC Netting in Bellin.
>>CorrectWould you please give me an information about T-code in SAP as seen below?
>>Correct
>>Would you please give me some information about T-code in SAP as seen below?And can I upload the netting data in test module like an IC balance?
>>CorrectI\'m looking forward for your reply.
>>CorrectMay be I will send e-mail everyday for the questions about IC Netting.>>Correct
Thank you for everthing.
>>Correct (observe the proper spelling of the word everything)
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