Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
What annoys you most about living at home with your family?
There is nothing that annoys me at home.
Rather, I always appreciate everything that my family gives me both mentally and financially.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sung Hoon! Thank you for doing your homework. Good luck on your first day. All the best!
~T. Elisha
There is nothing that annoys me at home.
>> correct!
Rather, I always appreciate everything that my family gives me both mentally and financially.
>> correct!
or:
>> In fact, I always appreciate everything my family gives me; both mentally and financially.
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