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Of course I am willing to live in another country because I want to emigrate to the US. I want to get a job in America and obtain permanant residency. Also, I am planning to take a PhD degree at American graduate schools.
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Of course I am willing to live in another country because I want to emigrate to the US.
>> CORRECT!
I want to get a job in America and obtain permanant residency.
>> I want to get a job in America and obtain a permanent residency.
Also, I am planning to take a PhD degree at American graduate schools.
>> Also, I am planning to take a PhD degree at an American university.
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