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Dear [Name]. [Name],
Good afternoon!
I heard that you requested the check open list to Mr. [Name] Tae.
The invoice of Frape Behr for Freight charge was clear on 2009.25.Mar.
But KIMDAE2 used the FB60 not used the PO #.
So still PO# 4500693616's line of number 20 still remaind in SAP.
Can I request cancelled the PO# in line of number 20?
Thank you.
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Hello Ms. [Name]! :)Happy Friday!!!!!!
Thank you so much for sending your composition.
Here are the corrections.
Take care!
Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CORRECT!
Good afternoon!>>CORRECT!I heard that you requested the check open list to Mr. [Name] Tae.>>CORRECT!The invoice of Frape Behr for Freight charge was clear on 2009.25.Mar.
>>CORRECT!But KIMDAE2 used the FB60 not used the PO #.
>>But KIMDAE2 used the FB60 and did not use the PO #.So still PO# 4500693616\'s line of number 20 still remaind in SAP.>>So the PO# 4500693616 line of number 20 still remains in SAP.Can I request cancelled the PO# in line of number 20?>>Can I request to cancel the PO# in line of number 20?Thank you.
>>CORRECT!
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