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2011-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 ritchel

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good afternoon! I heard that you requested the check open list to Mr. [Name] Tae. The invoice of Frape Behr for Freight charge was clear on 2009.25.Mar. But KIMDAE2 used the FB60 not used the PO #. So still PO# 4500693616's line of number 20 still remaind in SAP. Can I request cancelled the PO# in line of number 20? Thank you.

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Hello Ms. [Name]! :)Happy Friday!!!!!! Thank you so much for sending your composition. Here are the corrections. Take care!   Dear [Name]. [Name],>>CORRECT! Good afternoon!>>CORRECT!I heard that you requested the check open list to Mr. [Name] Tae.>>CORRECT!The invoice of Frape Behr for Freight charge was clear on 2009.25.Mar. >>CORRECT!But KIMDAE2 used the FB60 not used the PO #. >>But KIMDAE2 used the FB60 and did not use the PO #.So still PO# 4500693616\'s line of number 20 still remaind in SAP.>>So the PO# 4500693616 line of number 20 still remains in SAP.Can I request cancelled the PO# in line of number 20?>>Can I request to cancel the PO# in line of number 20?Thank you. >>CORRECT!

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