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Which would you rather spend your money on - a wonderful house or wonderful holidays?
I would rather buy a wonderful house than go on wonderful holidays.
It is mainly becuase a house can be sold later on, but holidays means consuming all the money. I prefer to be safe rather than use up all money.
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[이름],
I would rather go on wonderful holidays because money would be useless when I die.(\",)
~Lynn
I would rather buy a wonderful house than go on wonderful holidays.
>> correct!
It is mainly becuase a house can be sold later on, but holidays means consuming all the money.
>> correct!
I prefer to be safe rather than use up all money.
>> correct!
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