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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Good morning!
How was your weekend?
I hope you has the great time for weenkend.
I could see the fireworks in my house area.
There was nice and variety view and an ear - splitting sound.
It was lomantic.
So...I try to down load Netting data using Y_BKE_40000126.
But I am not authorized to use transaction Y_BKE_40000126.
Can I use the transaction Y_BKE_40000126 tomorrow if I request authorization today??
Frist of all I will request authorization for Y_BKE_40000126 tomorrow.
Thank you for your help.
Here is ficture of the fireworks.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Happy Monday! Tank you for this composition. I made few corrections. Please be guided:
Good morning! >>CorrectHow was your weekend?>>CorrectI hope you has the great time for weenkend.>>I hope you had a great time during the weekend.I could see the fireworks in my house area.>>CorrectThere was nice and variety view and an ear - splitting sound.>>They were different, nice and ear splitting sound.It was lomantic. >> It was romantic.
So...I try to down load Netting data using Y_BKE_40000126.>>CorrectBut I am not authorized to use transaction Y_BKE_40000126.>>CorrectCan I use the transaction Y_BKE_40000126 tomorrow if I request authorization today?? >>CorrectFirst of all, I will request authorization for Y_BKE_40000126 tomorrow.>>Correct
Thank you for your help.>>CorrectHere is ficture of the fireworks.
>> Here are the pictures of the fireworks.
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