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2011-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Dear [Name], Good morning! How was your weekend? I hope you has the great time for weenkend. I could see the fireworks in my house area. There was nice and variety view and an ear - splitting sound. It was lomantic. So...I try to down load Netting data using Y_BKE_40000126. But I am not authorized to use transaction Y_BKE_40000126. Can I use the transaction Y_BKE_40000126 tomorrow if I request authorization today?? Frist of all I will request authorization for Y_BKE_40000126 tomorrow. Thank you for your help. Here is ficture of the fireworks.

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Hello there,      Happy Monday! Tank you for this composition. I made few corrections. Please be guided: Good morning! >>CorrectHow was your weekend?>>CorrectI hope you has the great time for weenkend.>>I hope you had a great time during the weekend.I could see the fireworks in my house area.>>CorrectThere was nice and variety view and an ear - splitting sound.>>They were different, nice and ear splitting sound.It was lomantic. >> It was romantic. So...I try to down load Netting data using Y_BKE_40000126.>>CorrectBut I am not authorized to use transaction Y_BKE_40000126.>>CorrectCan I use the transaction Y_BKE_40000126 tomorrow if I request authorization today?? >>CorrectFirst of all, I will request authorization for Y_BKE_40000126 tomorrow.>>Correct Thank you for your help.>>CorrectHere is ficture of the fireworks. >> Here are the pictures of the fireworks.

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