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2018-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. clarify 2. reasonable cost 3. go through the motions 4. get stressed with Every company needs to clarify what the pros and cons of Cloud-based internal groupware. Because we need to maintain our information at a reasonable cost. If not, system administrator will get stressed with an inefficient system. They might go through the motions of doing work.

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1. clarify
2. reasonable cost
3. go through the motions
4. get stressed with


Every company needs to clarify what the pros and cons of Cloud-based internal groupware. Because we need to maintain our information at a reasonable cost.

>> or: It\'s necessary for companies to clarify the benefits and drawbacks of Cloud-based internal groupware considering the need to maintain their information at a reasonable cost. [Don\'t start a sentence with the word \'because\' as they are only acceptable in spoken English.]


If not, system administrator will get stressed with an inefficient system.

>> Or: The system administrator will get stressed with an inefficient system otherwise.


They might go through the motions of doing work.

>> They might be only going through the motions at work.

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