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1. tons of work
2. it’s all in the mind
3. demotion
4. disciplinary action
5. consequence
Every day, I need to deal with tons of work, so I feel very exhausted all the time.
>> or: I am obliged to take on tons of work on a daily basis, which results to my beingconstantly worn out.
However, I think it is all in the mind. That is, I should endure.
>> or: However, I believe that it\'s all in the mind. That is, I should put up with everything.
Otherwise, I might be demoted and there will be some disciplinary actions.
>> I might be demoted otherwise and the company may even take disciplinary action against me.
I want to be a person of consequence.
>> or: It distresses me to think that I might end up becoming a person of little or no consequence.
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