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2018-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. tons of work 2. it’s all in the mind 3. demotion 4. disciplinary action 5. consequence Every day, I need to deal with tons of work, so I feel very exhausted all the time. However, I think it is all in the mind. That is, I should endure. Otherwise, I might be demoted and there will be some disciplinary actions. I want to be a person of consequence.

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Jean 


1. tons of work
2. it’s all in the mind
3. demotion
4. disciplinary action
5. consequence

Every day, I need to deal with tons of work, so I feel very exhausted all the time.

>> or: I am obliged to take on tons of work on a daily basis, which results to my beingconstantly worn out.


However, I think it is all in the mind. That is, I should endure.

>>  or: However, I believe that it\'s all in the mind. That is, I should put up with everything.


Otherwise, I might be demoted and there will be some disciplinary actions.

>> I might be demoted otherwise and the company may even take disciplinary action against me.


I want to be a person of consequence.

>> or:  It distresses me to think that I might end up becoming a person of little or no consequence.


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