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2018-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. risk taker 2. play safe 3. stab / stabbing / stabbed 4. aggravate 5. minimize 1,2 I am not a risk taker, and the most of the time i play it safe. 3. There are so many people who get stabbed by a stranger in Korea. 4,5 You need to minimize the loss of money, and surely you must not aggravate the situation.

강사 첨삭

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Jean 


1. risk taker
2. play safe
3. stab / stabbing / stabbed
4. aggravate
5. minimize



1,2 I am not a risk taker, and the most of the time i play it safe.
>> I am not a risk taker, and I play it safe most of the time. 


 3. There are so many people who get stabbed by a stranger in Korea.

>> or: Countless people get stabbed by a complete stranger in Korea.

 4,5 You need to minimize the loss of money, and surely you must not aggravate the situation.

>> or: You need to minimize losing too much money, and I\'m positive that you don\'t want to aggravate the situation.

>> or: It is essential that you minimize the losses in your investment or in the stock market, and surely you want to avoid aggravating the situation at all costs.

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