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Dear [Name],
Good morning!
I have some questions about balance of 19000250.
We put in SAP all of Intercompany invoic in 31.Oct.2011.
But there are RNV balance 393,935KRW not Zero.
I checked the PO # history. GR was done in 7,and 11.Oct.2011 . GR cancelled it in 11.Oct.2011. IR was done in 12.Oct. 2011 as seen below.
you can find the balance of 5005855608 and 5005836007. we try to terminated the balance by many ways with Ms. [Name].
But we couln't solved it.
Would you please give me a solution how to make a zero .
The PO# is 5900000941 and vendor# is 21002552 (BG).
Thank you for your help.
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Hello there Ms. [Name]! :)Thank you so much for your composition.
Here are your corrections my dear!
Take care and I\'ll talk to you soon! :)
Dear [Name],>>CORRECT!Good morning!>>CORRECT!I have some questions about balance of 19000250.
>>I have some questions about the balance of 19000250.We put in SAP all of Intercompany invoic in 31.Oct.2011.
>>We put in the SAP all of the intercompany invoices in 31.Oct.2011.But there are RNV balance 393,935KRW not Zero.
>>But there are RNV balances 393,935KRW and not zero.I checked the PO # history. GR was done in 7,and 11.Oct.2011 . GR cancelled it in 11.Oct.2011. IR was done in 12.Oct. 2011 as seen below.
>>I checked the PO # history. GR was done on 7 and 11.Oct.2011 . GR cancelled it on 11.Oct.2011. IR was done on 12.Oct. 2011 as seen below.you can find the balance of 5005855608 and 5005836007. we try to terminated the balance by many ways with Ms. [Name].
>>You can find the balance of 5005855608 and 5005836007. We tried to terminate the balance in so many ways with Ms. [Name].But we couln\'t solved it.
>>But we couldn\'t solve it. Would you please give me a solution how to make a zero .
>>Would you please give me a solution on how to make a zero?The PO# is 5900000941 and vendor# is 21002552 (BG).
>>The PO# is 5900000941 and the vendor# is 21002552 (BG).Thank you for your help.
>>CORRECT!
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