Composition
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What is your proudest accomplishment so far this year?
My happiest accomplishment in this year is to meet my girlfriend, because I feel very stable when I am talking with her. I am very thankful to have met her to God.
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What is your proudest accomplishment so far this year?
My happiest accomplishment in this year is to meet my girlfriend, because I feel very stable when I am talking with her. I am very thankful to have met her to God.
>> Meeting my girlfriend and convincing her to become my girl is the accomplishment that I\'m most happy about this 2018 because having her in my life makes me feel very stable. I am very thankful to God to have met her.
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