Composition

2018-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? I completely agree with the opinion that says that maintaining libraries is a waste. I totally support reducing unnecessary paperworks by utilizing digital technologies. I guess it might be more efficient and flexible to change ourselves into somewhat new paradigms. Personally, I am also using tablet PC for acquiring some new information, and I always store all my works into Google Cloud. As for my friends as software engineers, they are also tech-savvy and willing to make use of information technologies.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your opinion about the homework I sent you. I really appreciate it.

Have a good night!

~Teacher Gina

I completely agree with the opinion that says that maintaining libraries is a waste. I totally support reducing unnecessary paperworks by utilizing digital technologies. I guess it might be more efficient and flexible to change ourselves into somewhat new paradigms. Personally, I am also using tablet PC for acquiring some new information, and I always store all my works into Google Cloud. As for my friends as software engineers, they are also tech-savvy and willing to make use of information technologies.

>> I completely agree with the opinion that says that maintaining libraries is a waste. I totally support reducing unnecessary paperworks by utilizing digital technologies. I guess it might be more efficient and flexible to change ourselves into somewhat new paradigms. Personally, I am also using a tablet PC for acquiring new information, and I always store all my works into Google Cloud. As for my friends, who are also software engineers, they are also tech-savvy and willing to make use of information technologies.

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