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2019-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. on a good/bad note 2. with a bang  3. hands down  4. on a lighter note  5. disparaging I did not end in a good note in the last workplace. I will make it big with a bang in the new workplace. However, I need to be hands down. Do not tell me I cannot, since I feel it is disparaging. Instead, just cheer me up in a lighter note.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. on a good/bad note
2. with a bang 
3. hands down 
4. on a lighter note 
5. disparaging

I did not end in a good note in the last workplace.

>> Things didn\'t end on a good note in my last workplace.

I will make it big with a bang in the new workplace.

>> Come what may, I\'m going to make my mark in my new company and will leave with a bang.

However, I need to be hands down.

>> In any case, I need to be hands on.

Do not tell me I cannot, since I feel it is disparaging.

>> Don\'t tell me otherwise since I feel it is disparaging.

Instead, just cheer me up in a lighter note.

>> On a lighter note, why don\'t you just cheer me up instead?

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