Composition
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tear up
2. subtle 
3. precipitate 
4. resolution 
5. catalyst
Tear up -> I teared up my ruined exam papers.
>> I tore up my ruined exam papers.
>> or: I teared up when I failed the exams.
Precipitate -> Prcipitate your employee to work hard.
>> The manager\'s narcissism and constant browbeating of employees have precipitated a mass resignation.
Subtle -> I can feel girls\' subtle emotional changes.
>> or: I can sense the subtle emotional changes in women.
Resolution -> I am a man of strong resolutions.
>> or: I can say that I\'m a man of great fortitude.
catalyst -> Jisung Park is a catalyst for my life.
>> Or: Jisung Park\'s phenomenal success was a catalyst for my new-found ambition.
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