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2011-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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Dear [Name] , I discussed this matter with my boss (Mr. [Name]) Unfortunately, we can not cancel the 2 debit notes. Because we already sent the materials to Hambach. We have to issue the invoice to sending the material to Intercompany in Korea law. I understood that the invoices under 1000 Eur are not possible for quality issues. But this case is return materials to Hambach and return delivery is not contain IC rules. So, would you please upload datas in the IC Reconciliation.? If you want it that we cancel the datas ,please contact our boss Mr, Ziehr. Thank you for your help.

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Hello Ms. [Name]! Here are your corrections. Thank you so much! -T.Ritchel Dear [Name] ,>>CORRECT!I discussed this matter with my boss (Mr. [Name]) >>I discussed this matter with my boss, Mr. [Name].Unfortunately, we can not cancel the 2 debit notes. >>Unfortunately, we cannot cancel the 2 debit notes.Because we already sent the materials to Hambach. >>CORRECT!We have to issue the invoice to sending the material to Intercompany in Korea law. >>We have to issue the invoice about sending the material to the intercompany according to the Korean law.I understood that the invoices under 1000 Eur are not possible for quality issues. >>CORRECT!But this case is return materials to Hambach and return delivery is not contain IC rules. >>But in this case,it is the materials returned to Hambach and the return delivery does not contain the IC rules.So, would you please upload datas in the IC Reconciliation.? >>So, would you please upload the datas in the IC reconciliation?If you want it that we cancel the datas ,please contact our boss Mr, Ziehr. >>If you want that we cancel the datas, please contact our boss, Mr. [Name].Thank you for your help. >>CORRECT!

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