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2019-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. crass 2. vulgar 3. bantering 4. astute 5. stand out I have behaved with crass insensitivity toward my girlfriend. Even though I did not use vulgar words, I lied to her. I used bantering words even though I do not love her anymore. She was not that astute to perceive it. If there is a contest for betrayers, I may stand out there.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

1. crass
2. vulgar
3. bantering
4. astute
5. stand out

I have behaved with crass insensitivity toward my girlfriend.
>> correct!~~

Even though I did not use vulgar words, I lied to her.
>> Regardless of the fact that I didn\'t use vulgar words, I was dishonest and attempted to deceive her.

I used bantering words even though I do not love her anymore.
>> I still exchange good-natured banter with my girl notwithstanding my lack of love for her.

She was not that astute to perceive it.
>> or: She wasn\'t astute enough to perceive the truth.

If there is a contest for betrayers, I may stand out there.
>> If there was a contest for the unfaithful or traitor, I would stand out.

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