Composition

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Your look-over of my Monday\'s composition was cut in the middle. Please have a look at it.:)

>> You overlooked my composition last Monday. You\'re about halfway through the composition. Please take a look at it.


 1. took offense
I hope she will not take offense at me.

>> I hope she didn\'t take offense.

 2. geographical separation
Often, geographical separation makes couples break up.

>> or: Couples frequently put an end to their romantic relationship as a result of geographical separation.

 3. hub for information tech
Pangyo is considered as a hub for the information tech in Korea

>> Pangyo is regarded as an information technology hub in Korea.

 4. in low spirit
I am in low spirits because of love

>> or: I am in low spirits because of my love life.

 5. wane
My enthusiasm for the girlfriend has waned grudually.

>> or: When my girlfriend moved to her home country, our geographical separation has in all likelihood caused the intensity of my feelings to gradually wane.