Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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1. case in point
2. intensity
3. physical attraction
4. homely
5. street smart
I think a physical attraction or a sexual attraction is a large part of falling in love.
>> correct ~~
As a case in point, I felt an immediate attraction for my current friend with benefits because her eyes are so gorgeous.
>> or: Case in point, I felt instantly drawn to my current friend with benefits because of her alluring pair of eyes.
However, she was disappointed with my attitude, and so she asked me if she got homely, I will not like her anymore. Thus, I need to be more earnest in controlling my intensity of feelings. In other words, I guess I should be street smart in love.
>> For that reason, she felt let down by my superficial feelings, and asked whether I\'d still feel attracted to her when she looks homely or when her beauty starts to fade with age. Thus, I have to stop wearing my heart on my sleeve. That is to say, I suppose that I should be more street smart in love.
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